this story is really good cant wait for the next chapeter...update soon : )

This sounds good...

:D

I love your story! It's wonderful and really well written. I feel really close to Maggie. :D plz update.

This story is really good, I check in almost every day to see if there is an update. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens at Steve's house!

This is such a powerful story. I love it to pieces. Can't wait for a new chapter. Don't know if ya'll have spring break where your from but if you do Happy Spring Break!

peace love happiness

The updates were disappointing... Your writing is actually really good, but there was only dialogue and it seems maybe you stopped writing this for yourself?? It just feels... flatter, somehow, like you got upset and separated from the character.

oh my god. is she ok? not mentally (cause of course not mentally) but physically?

Oh my god... I love your story, but it's so sad..
I cried while reading it.. :)

goodness forget the warning about self harm and rape you need one about how sad this story is. i've been on the verge of tears for the past few chapters. maybe i'm just a big sissy. no that can't be it i didn't even cry watching Titanic. anywho. great story update soon.
peace love happiness

Aww, that really sucks. I hope you have luck retrieving files! ANd as always, update soon!! :)

WOOT!
How the plot thickens, and how it's changed from SPEAK.
I'm lovin' it so much. It's such a dark tale, and your
style of writing depressing stories is really good,
so good, in fact, that I'm actually hoping to read a sad,
horrible, unthinkable ending, just to cry at your expertise
of writing from a dark perspective.
The cutting portion hit me really hard, seeing as to how, I too
am a cutter. I tried to recover, but I can't. And I think that
if I wound up in therapy, or in a recovery/rehab/asylum/etc.,
I would die. I am also interested to see if the story takes a turn down a more IMPULSE, by Ellen Hopkins, journey. Lol. So I am stoked to continue reading to see how the plot is resolved, or how it thickens.
Keep it up, babe :)]
- Alli.
/band_life_2012. We can have a li'el chat about books or anything ya fancy, love ;)

Ohmf, this chapter made me cry.. Good job on the story so far ;)

Amazing chapter, and I will admit that it had me tearing up. I hope updates come soon. :)

This was powerful. Very. I really enjoy this so far, thanks for updating.

3:28 in Scotland? It's only 10:28 here on the East Coast, USA.

I just wanted to let you know that I sat here and read your story straight through. It was amazing - great grammar, as well.
It does seem a bit remniscent of 'Speak', though - the plotline and the not speaking - but other than that your book is great so far.

(if it's not too much trouble do you mind checking out my story 'Look At Her'? it's all right if you don't want to, I was just wondering.)