Wow. Gorgeous. I love all this imagery; it's absolutely delicious, both in subject and just because I love imagery. Ha. "sexual as nectar." Man. That just got me. And "there is only enough/elbowroom for you to consume me, completely." That was ridiculously hot. Gorgeous gorgeous. Make me want to write, why don't you. Keep writing! :)

dude have i ever told you that you are amazing. just be careful not to make it sound like broken up prose, the fourth stanza especially, i fall into that trap all too often as well.

but damn, i wish i could write like you. your subject matter always blows me away. oh, and thanks for your reviews :)