[: I like your descriptions. They are very lovely, carefully detailed.

It took me a couple of reads before I felt I could understand the context, but I think I do.

Truly, your descriptions are what make it so lovely. I particularly liked:

"Snow falls outside

Like the particles of sand in her Californian Summer dreams,"

because... it seems so easy to relate to, but sort of ... contradictory.

I guess it's hard to explain what I mean.

Still, this is beautiful.
Great job [:
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Katie

nicely written. i must say that i always find myself very captivated and impressed by your writing. well worded. keep writing.