That woz pretty sick :P well done!
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CONTINUE CONTINUE I LOVE THIS ;D

pleasee i beg of you :D

OMG that was amazing I love this story. I find your use of language very nice also, it fits the time frame you are working around and makes the story all the more interesting. Please update again soon!!

I can see this going somewhere. William needs a bit more personality but that will develop I'm hoping!

So far it's good though!

Wow! i absolutely love it so far i really hope you update again soon!