I really liked this. :]
I've never heard of that creature before, but I think you did a good job of portraying it.

So I'm assuming their stories are going to become intertwined or something? Interesting. :]

Update soon.

--Jessie my l o v e

p.s. pay it forward.

Seems like an interesting story, but I'm a little confused.
It's like a twisted version of the Cain and Abel story, but I'm not sure if that was your intention or not.
Anyways, it was written rather well. :]
Update soon :]