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Jessie My Love 2008-12-24 . chapter 2
This was a good first chapter. :]
You gave enough background information so that it makes sense, but you didn't bore the reader.
I like your main character as well; she's very realistic.
Anyways, good job.
Update soon. :]
--Jessie my l o v e
Jessie My Love 2008-12-23 . chapter 1
This is a great prologue.
It was short and simple, but you successfully grabbed my attention.
I do hope you update this as soon as possible. :]
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