Very sweet story. I loved it. Although I wish she could've said a few things too - like "I'm sorry I hit you" and "I felt bad for yelling at you earlier" and stuff. Oh well. Good work! :)

I know it's June, but I decided to reread it.. and it made me so, so happy. Again. I love Christmassy feelings anytime of the year, and it was just great. I love that you've written a story about childhood enemies, but I especially love that you've defied the cliche and made them grow up BEFORE they got out of high school. SO refreshing! I love it. :)

=\ =3 =)=D yay!

YAY for shortish people! ORF COARSE LOVE THE STORY!

AW~ This is such a sweet and adorable story!

Cute cute cute
It's a little after Christmas but I'm glad I found this.
Happy belated Holidays!

Aw cute. It could definitely span into something more than a short story. Good job :) Keep it up!
Faith

wow! love it! =D that was so nice... though a bit cliche that eric stayed loyal to his crush of all time. anyway. that was great! advance happy new year by the way! this'll be definitely be one of my favorites. =)

So obvious who Eric will be. But I'm loving it.

Merry Christmas! This definitely made my day, and you didn't add stupid stuff like them getting into the same college, so yay!

While I do agree with you about it being a fluffy story, I really don't think it was poorly written at all. This was a cute short-story and I think it stands very well on it's own. However if you are considering to ever expand upon this story using your characters I think you have a good set-up that I would be interested in reading more about them. Good job.

great story :) and thanks, i did have a nice christmas :D

nice. anger management much?

Aw...now that's some cute stuff. Loved it!

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