I havent read it yet and just wanted to ask if it truly was about Cherry?

No! Jack is dying?

And I knew Erela would be a creep. Now as to her motive, if she cried when Jack left her, perhaps she's scorned?

dang it! this new story was beginning to get super interesting!! and now i wont be able to read it for over a year!! not FAIR!!

im really loving it, and i like the pictures you posted on your site!!

update soon please

Aww Jack can't die! No! That makes me sad, he is breath of fresh air. Wow, a year and a half eh? Well, i can wait, i love this story! ^^
Thanks so much for making a sequel, really, i couldnt get enough of Valkyrie Tempest.
You Rock. :P

Ah wow this starts out great. What a shame it will be 1.5 years before another update. Regardless I'll put it on my alerts and I'll definitely read it when the next chapter comes out. Wow... to think that I'd be graduated from high school when this story updates. Alright.

Oh, neat! I like Erlking! And yay for Jack not dying for a while. :_( I really like him too. So, can't wait to read Rie's scene. So Erlking is going to be a permanent fixture of this story? Love the idea. Even if it the next scene isn't finished, please post it, pretty, pretty please with a cherry on top? This series is just so captivating.

But I don't want Cherry to have to associate with Miguel, I don't like him one bit! Although this is seeming like a nice twist you have me intrigued, and a little nervous, haha. Good chapter though.

luved the chapter but i really hopr jack isnt dying! but good luck on ur mission! and i can tootaly wait 18 monthes 4 Another chapter its just that good!!

O, this IS interesting. I'm much happier now than I was last chapter, though I was still pretty happy. I was wondering if Cherry was going to be a messenger girl. But indeed, the plot thickens.
Thank you for updating!

How mysterious... But that confirms my suspicions. Good chapter, one boo-boo:

"How do I encourage her to use her powers."

Need a (?) there, possibly? My only little complaint... But awesome chapter - and series, of course - and I hope to see more before you're gone for so long. >:3 Good luck and we'll miss you! And this is so worth an 18-month wait!

So the mystery finally begins! Such a cliffhanger there... I can't wait to see what happens. And poor Jack... he's one of my favorite characters! These people, Erela and Miguel, seem like they're up to no good, but of course I don't know anything from what you're giving us so far...

eighteen months! *sigh* I'll wait =D so good luck, have a safe trip, do well, and have fun! Thanks~

Wow, that's fascinating. I don't know where you get all these awesome ideas, seriously. There are so many things here that I'm curious about--Erela, and the murder; the shadows being cast and what they mean; Rie; Cherry's continually advancing position as a fire/sun goddess; Jack and his impending death; etc.

Hmm, Erlkonig definitely disorients me a bit. Wait, so does/did Jack like Cherry in a non-platonic way?

Hmm. But man man man I really want to read more, and now I'm more upset than ever that you'll be gone for 18 months. :( But once again, I wish you all of the very best.

Oh that's mean. I really want to know what is going to happen next! Sigh. I suppose I will have to wait. I was wondering what the point of the prologue was, but now I see. So did Jack tell Erela everything? Also why are all these new apprentices girls? Um, will there be a new overseer? And I am very sad that Jack is dying. He makes me happy.

Good luck and have fun on your trip! I have no doubts that you will come back a changed person. God bless!

So, IF Jack is dying (which he better NOT be), does that mean that Erela is to take his place?