Herro there. Hope ya remember me. :) Anyway, this is really an interesting one-shot here. You did well in doing the suspense and drama. You also did well to portray the Shadow as some form of sought after power albeit I was hoping to know more about it. To be honest though, I think it would be better if this story was done as a running novel given how the story ended, but that's just me. And yeah, thanks very much for your review on Ancient Legacy. :)

P.S: Hopefully you can pay back this review via The Eternal Grail. :)

This was really good. I loved how you described all your characters, they all had distinct personalities and were realistic. Good job.

The story itself was interesting, but I wish it was a bit longer. Overall, good job. Great description and everything. :]

-Jessie m p.s. pay it forward

ah what is going to happen? I love it its awesome what is going on ah i can't believe this is a oneshot ah *smacking head against the wall (repeatedly)* hehehehehe