Oh man poor Malik... :(

Its not looking good for him! Great work!

I know you don't really talk to me anymore, even though I have tried talking to you, but anyways, I just wanted to point out one thing, perhaps it's different on the Canadian side but on the US side you can't actually drive up to the Niagara Falls, and if you ever want to see a video of it, I've got several from when I went there.

Whats next, whats next?

*smiles*

Lol oddly enough at the beginning of this I kept thinking that Abbey was pregnant already...

Strange.

I didn't see the parents thing coming until they were like, "changing diapers" and I was like, "Noo don't tell me...". My reaction when they were finally like, "YUP PREGGERS HAHA" I was just like, "Holy. Shit."

Anyway~
Till next time,
~AftG

i've had those days where one small blip of miscommunication screws up everything and they SUCK!

lol, good work!

OMG, yes I definitely want to see a spin-off of Mr. Malachi Marx. Love his name.

ROFL Oh jeez.

The last line...What's the real story behind Malachi Marx?

My IMMEDIATE thought was, "He's a commy, of course! Jesus Aiden, you're so stupid sometimes..." Damn me and having random Social Studies-remembering moments. Carl Marx= communism...yeah, shutting up now. :)

Not fair, you made me cry by the end of the arc...lol. (My laptop is broken and it's taken me a while to be able to check all my e-mails an updates. *sigh* I'm backed up on everything, hence why I JUST read the arc.)

awesome chapter! and i really like Malachi! Sucha sexy name to go with a sexy body! I can't wait to see what you have planned with him haha.

Only critique: "I did, but everything I thought about it, I never did it" do you mean; "I did, but EVERY TIME I thought about it, I never did it," ?

So I don't mind a new character.
But in all honesty, at the first sign of him and Aiden do absolutely the most miniscule thing to hurt Max, I'll quit reading forever. We waited for them forever and Aiden is already a little free with his admiration of other guys.

I literally couln't stand to see Max hurt, but that's a testement to your writing and how you've made me fall so hopelessly in love with this couple. Please don't have Aiden even tempted to cheat and please give us some of your amazing Max/Aiden fluff!

I loved this arc and look forward to the next bit.

I'm not gonna lie, I was crying by the end of this chapter! very good work! i can't secribe how well of a job u did!

Incredibly intense chapter... I like Drew, but he was kinda cruel with his words. I have to sympathize with Aiden, since one of the reason's why he was screwed up was because of Gene did. But let us see how all this works out!

well some stuff was cleared up, but even more became murky! man, ur such a tease with Aiden lol.

Gah, this is looking to be an amazing arc. I have some ideas and so looking forward to any of them are right. Possibly not, but in any case can't wait for the next part!