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mega 2009-03-30 . chapter 10
oh please oh please update this story! i don't understand why there are so few reviews, but it's really pretty interesting. i can't wait to find out what happens next!

what happened to jacob's forehead? i wonder what kind of person pamela's dad is. also, there's one thing that doesn't make sense. in the beginning, pam was in her room when jacob came home. she locked the door because she was suddenly reminded of her dad's drinking and bringing different women home... from that, i thought maybe her dad had beat her or something. some reason that would create her fear. but, then pamela said she and her dad practically ignored each other and there was no fear? how is she standing up to jacob if she was afraid before?
Spurlunk 2009-03-06 . chapter 10
Nice chapter, and your new title suits it more too. I wish I was good at titles, I suck at them. xP
Spurlunk 2009-02-15 . chapter 8
He hit her? What kind of a guy would hit her?? =(
Hateful Loving 2009-02-14 . chapter 7
that was pretty good! please update soon and make the chapters slightly longer! :D

HaTeFuL LoViNg
Spurlunk 2009-02-12 . chapter 7
Exciting suspense! Can't wait to read more.
Spurlunk 2009-02-08 . chapter 6
Selling drugs door to door? O.O
Tecna 2009-02-08 . chapter 5
What I enjoy the best about your stories is the way the conversations between the characters flow. Mostly it reminds me of the conversations we have, especially the 'whateva' part, seeing as that's my speciality.
Nonetheless, it's still fantastic and I'm hoping to read more. I still envy the fact that you continue to upate, whereas I'm stuck with a blimmin, writers block!
So... yeah, great chapters, update soon.
Tecna ;)
Spurlunk 2009-02-06 . chapter 5
Nice chapter, I'm eager to read what happens next. The title of your story is a bit strangeish though.
Scarey 2009-02-03 . chapter 1
this author is obviously going to be a great hit one day
very well written, well done.
najat 2009-01-30 . chapter 4
love it love it love it cant wait 2 read da rest of it!
Spurlunk 2009-01-28 . chapter 4
Besides my inherent bias against the name 'Pam', this story is pretty cool so far. Lots of questions left unanswered. xP
Spurlunk 2009-01-09 . chapter 3
Slow-moving, but intriguing. I'll be back.
madeyes61 2009-01-06 . chapter 3
i like this story very much so far. Please update soon!
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