Wow, this is really wonderful. Such a great plot, I love the ending so much. And you wrote this all so well. Really lovely and sweet :)

Ahh, the story made me smile and cry all at the same time. Its very very well written and alittle bitter sweet. I also love the symbolization of Fate's name.

This story is absolutely amazing. You have the honor, although I don't know if you care, of being the author of the first story I have ever reviewed on fictionpress. Aren't you proud?

Anyway, I would like to tell you that your story is incredibly moving and sweet. It has a hint of the supernatural in it but is also realistic. I just have one question, how did Fate die? I don't think anybody mentioned it. I also want to know more about Fate. Even his name seems to imply that he's not really, you know human. Maybe you could write a story about him? I'd love that.

So congrats on a great story.