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Indigo Reality 2008-12-27 . chapter 1
I suck at reviews, but here it goes.

It sounds in this poem it sounds like your coming out of your "dark place" or whatever it is you call it. I really like the way that it is written, I especially admire it, because for me, the lighter, less heavy stuff is harder to write.

But I just want to make sure your okay. I mean that sounds weird, but your poem has that undertone of, "I don't want to be weak, so I'm not going to feel at all" Which I have done before... and completely sucks **.

Anyway, there's my ** review. Feel free to message me.

Indigo Reality
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2008-12-25 . chapter 1
I like it:)
Write on!
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