OH. MY. GOD.

I totally, absolutely, definetly

L.O.V.E.D. it.

seriously, I've never met someone who could describe

the dance of love or any other like

you did.

Chikako

I absolutely adored this story. It was really well written and very enjoyable. I love the way you describe the dance in connection with their emotions. I only wish it was longer, I enjoyed reading this.

aww! i can't stop the grin on my face. it's uber cute:)

I must say, this is your best shot yet.
It's well written and you definitely depicted dancing in a very lovely way. It's so intense and I can actually imagine them dancing. Great job!