I really like this story! It has a really cool plot and I would love for you you to update it soon.

I haven't read the Old version so this is really interesting to me. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :]

~AsianStar

Oh how I have missed this story!! It is different but it's still fantastic! :)

very good chapter please keep writing! I read you first version and I can't wait to see what you do with this one.
Keep up the good work and I hope inspiration finds you ready.

hey, (I haven't ever written a review before, not sure what you usually recive! Here goes)
you know when you pick up a really good book, and you can not put it down for the life of you, and crave the sequals? ...I'm addicted and desperate for more!!

Your plot line and writting style are out of other internet stories leauges to me atm, I was a little skeptical of the superman/dark knight, but your winning me over..careful its not too predictable and doesn't get cheesy!

totaly original, different from the usual blah blah blah- a bit of excitment that doesn't yet involve any reference to twilight or labels-which drives me to insanity!

A new world, keep writting please you got me hooked as I'm sure many others are:)

Raine X

This story is amazing! I cannot wait to read more!

Hey, I'm someone who read the old version of this story, and I must say that so far I like this one. I did enjoy some things more from the older version, and I hope you keep some of those things.

Now I have a few questions about Dusk, my favorite of all the super heros of this story. Will she ever return? And if she does, will Midnight be freaked out? Or not even know what is going on?

Anyhoo, I look forward to read more of this story, and your other now. :D Keep up the good work!

Really great story..
Your plots are so original. And you're exceptionally good at creating and describing a universe.
I love Immortal Sapphire. And I'm starting to love this just as much.
Reading this proved to me that the quality of your writing is very consistent. And its certainly not like an amateurs.
I've become your fan.
Hope this gets its due attention.

Cheers,
Winged Unicorn

I've been following this story since Quizilla and i like how most of it is changed up. Is Midnight still going to be a masked vigilante though, that was one part that I really enjoyed & thought was different. Great writing though! Can't wait for more installments :D

I love the idea that you have going here and I can't wait to read more. The only problem I have is a use of some of the words. I understand "blue heavens" sounds more flowing and poetic than "blue skies." That's just an example, and that's not against you as an author. Just a personal preference of mine.

Keep the story going. It would be disastrous for this little diamond to not be finished or for more people to review it.

This was a really good prologue. :]
Usually when stories start off with dreams they are really cliche, but so far you have kept me interested.

The description at the beginning was beautiful, but I was sad to find that as the chapter went on the amount of imagery was less and less. So, I would try and focus on having a bit more description.

This was a very enjoyable story to read. I obviously didn't read the original, but I will try to keep up with this one.
Update soon. :]

-Jessie my love

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