The whole list thing going on was pretty sweet, but it lacked depth. The meaning didn't, just the...um...DISPLAY of it. Okay, yeah, we're nothing without those little traits that make us unique! It's because of them that we are writers and human beings. Nice message, being a part of something that everyone is and stuff...

~SD

I must say, this was a lovely poem. Though, the lack of punctuation/ capitals seemed to take away from some of the flow. Only in the beginning though, for I have noticed that you started to use them later on in the poem. For me, the bold letters seem to take away from the poem, but that is just my personal opinion. Also. I would suggest that if you are going to use the '&' symbol, to put spaces between it and the word.

But, the poem is nice and has a soft subtle sense of rhyme. It was a joy to read.
-Drea/ heart shaped box

For the review game.

It's a bit confusing...

I really liked this. I read it twice after reading the a/n at the bottom and then realized the rainbow. This is unique and I enjoyed reading it.

This is for the Review Game! w00t.

I think this is cute. :P I wasn't sure what in the heck you were doing at first, but once I figured it out, it was nice. I really like how at the ends of some stanzas, the last descriptive word is one you would not expect. Danger, striking, and minty were my favourites.

Orange, red, and blue were the best stanzas, because they were full of original images. My favourite original image was for blue "and windows classic". Very very nice. I think yellow and green were both a little stretched and overly cliched.

The way you took certain words and made them bold, or put dots or spaces, or whatever... I find that tacky and unnecessary in anyone's poems, so yours is no exception. But if you're going to do it, at least be consistent - purple doesn't have any word in it that is special.

Overall, adorable with a nice concept. :) It's not going to be winning any earth-shattering awards anytime soon, since it's all cleverness with only a meh kind of meaning to it. But really cute, I liked it. :D

-Jesse