:[ i like this good job!

I'll review (because you reviewed me!)

This was powerful. Don't underestimate the power of a few words-just because it isn't long doesn't mean it doesn't have an impact (says the girl who didn't finish NaNoWriMo last year)

But this was good. Really. And I'm not that into poetry, so this is a very high compliment.

I loved the imagery in this piece! It wasn't too hard to comprehend, so I don't believe it really needed the explaination. I usually have trouble with free verse because it doesn't have a normal ryme scheme or meter but this flows nicely. keep up the good work