 she smolders 2008-12-29 . chapter 1This makes me wish for things I haven't thought about in a while. I'm really loving the last line. Take care. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2008-12-27 . chapter 1Oh, that is lovely. Kind of bittersweet, but very nice. I love the idea of words getting left on a bedside table. Very poetic. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |
 your taste of stardust 2008-12-27 . chapter 1i really like this.
it's been awhile since i've seen an acrostic that flows.
yours until the wind changes,
gg |
 S.R.Deosil 2008-12-27 . chapter 1Been too long since I last opened up fictionpress.
And its like I've been missing out on something I shouldnt have; your words. It's beautiful and too difficult for me to describe but its enough (more than) to make me feel things differently.
thank you for sharing this. |