"Visceral penumbrance, proletariat." Brilliant diction! I love the comparison between a sort of natural shadow to a common-person. It also ties a lot of Sociology into this poem, by referencing Marx. I like how this part connects to the ending, with "Freedman's tongue." :D!

the wording in this is interesting.

im gonna hv to read it a few more times.

yours until the wind changes,

gg