my favorite parts were about the cats and texas. very descriptive and haunting. the opening stanza ia a little cliche and teen angsty, especially the second two lines. the end seems a little cheesy and immature. the daisy stanza is great. overall very nice write!:)

I like the first stanza a lot. The idea that death is sweeter when masquerading as something happier is very powerful!

"Bonnet-covered heads." A perfect description os the elegance of a daisy.

"A land of culture and bird shit." WOW. That line blew me away. So honest and raw.