hey great story...cant wait to see what happens next!

Haha nice! Make out games... brilliant.

Please keep writing. I want to know how team scott and ave turn out. I enjoy reading all your stories. keep it up

I'm really enjoying this story! I'm really intrigued and excited about the Senior Games. It kinda reminds me of Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, honestly. Haha. How long does the Games last anyway? Is it a year-long deal or just a month long?

I really love Scott's last name (Davenport). Haha totally random, but I love looking at people's names. :p

Thanks! Update soon!

I'm kind of interested in beta-ing? I'm a bit of a grammar freak sometimes, that's mostly what I'd be good for. But I could offer some critique for your story as well possibly. Just message me and maybe we'll see where this goes?

Love this story. Great chemistry between Scott and Avery. Interesting plot line too. I like the Make Out Games idea. Very original. Looking forward to more.

Hullo! I stumbled upon this story tonight, and I'm really glad I read it. Your writing has a nice flow to it, along with your descriptions of everything. Details and feelings aren't forced or rushed, like other stories I've read earlier tonight. You're definitely one of my new favorite authors, heh. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for fueling the hopeless romantic side of me. Peace.

WOW.!.

this is really enjoyable.!.
I've bee avoiding young adult fic for awhile because i find the way the story is written to be to "teenagerised" but you managed to write in a style that is appealing and doesn't make teenagers sound stupid.
Great job.!.

P.S don't forget ur question marks and i wouldnt mind beiing a beta reader for ur story only prob is that i can't be a beta because i dnt write so if ur interested anyway send me a msg and i'll be more than happy to do it.!.

their so cute together.they make a great team.
TEAM SCOTT AND AVE.

I really love this story and I'm really cheering for Scott (D.) on this one. He makes me smile. Can't wait to read more!

i just read this story and i fell in love with it!
its awesome! :)

please update soon!(:(:(:(:

awesomee chapter! avery denies it now but she is very attracted to scott and she does like him no matter how many times she denies it. he also likes her to. i can't wait until they get together!! update soon please!! i can't wait to read moree. =D

i really like this story! keep updating quick! when i got to the end and you said-Finally i finished!-i thought you actually meant the story! cool. xx

Great Story!
i haven't actually be on in a while
have you tried sending you writing to a publishing company or something?
you have a great talent and if you every write a book
i would love to but it
please keep updating i really eenjoy your stories

Ooh this story is getting interesting! Please update soon!