|Reviews for Can You?|
| Gunning Twice 1/1/09 . chapter 1
See tash? YOU'RE POPULAR! i read the reviews and they are so RIGHT! see? you're not bad at writing poems at all! quit putting yourself down for me, please? :)
| donxcat 12/28/08 . chapter 1
very good. you seem to have opened a new era of poetry.
I will remember you and I hope you are not gone.
| Chasing Skylines 12/27/08 . chapter 1
Hm, surprisingly, or maybe not so, I liked this format. The italics really made those lines give an impact and 'pop.'
I also like how you related each action with a call for help; made it have an acute feeling.
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| fatbird33 12/27/08 . chapter 1
oo nice last line! very nice intense feeling!