See tash? YOU'RE POPULAR! i read the reviews and they are so RIGHT! see? you're not bad at writing poems at all! quit putting yourself down for me, please? :)

very good. you seem to have opened a new era of poetry.

I will remember you and I hope you are not gone.

Hm, surprisingly, or maybe not so, I liked this format. The italics really made those lines give an impact and 'pop.'

I also like how you related each action with a call for help; made it have an acute feeling.

-Review Marathon, link in profile

oo nice last line! very nice intense feeling!