hey kay! love it and see? i actually moved my ** to fiction press lool well actually it was to show a friend of mine so ye lool sorry love it tho and hes asking if ur lesbo x3 lol told him u werent ..dont turn lesbo on us kayy!! LOVE IT! love maxie

Im lovin thiss -dies-


this chap makes me...i dont know...make me think...
LY!

Oh-ho! So this wasn't Charlotte's first experience with girls, huh? Sweet. A story as to how/why Charlotte and her ex broke up might make for a good chapter. Just a thought. (: Great work, Kay. Love ya!

P.S. Sorry it took me so long to review. XD

Too lazy to log in, plus my computer's being mentally retarded [though, I suppose it should have a brain in order to do that... whatevvs]. Anyways, this was really beautiful [chapters 14-16] I just read those chapters and they were really nice, I loved how you added that they were having a normal day, people watching in the park. That was sweet. (:

:D :D :D I'm so happy I've found someone who writes these kind of stories. I loved this, btw. :D

Hola chica! It's been so long! This is an AMAZING story, that really captured my attention, not only because it's about a lesbian, but because it captures the exact emotions I've been having all night about a friend who was staying the night. Idk, you just have a way with words, babe. (:

WHOA! This is a TOTALLY awesome story thus far; nothing much has happened, but i really like the way you're writing it, even if it is based off of another author's writing style. It's still tres chic. ^_^ Well, I best be off, but keep up the good work!

Loves from one weirmal girl to another,
Meggsy