Why is it when it matters all girls seem to think that the date is truly not a date? It's weird.

Poor Sophia. Her dad is a jackass! I hope that she finally stands up to him and lives her life!

update soon!

Don't listen to Claire! She's just being a baby because I ate the rest of the ice cream. It's good- not great, but good.

Honestly...the chapter is lacking something. I don't know what, but it seems like everything is all over the place here.

Thanks for updating! Was a good chapter. i hope sophia stands up to her horrible father.

that better only be a beginning, else wise it'd be a crappy as all hell ending! please write the next chap faster!

5 a.m.! WAY harsh! I hope you survive to write the next chapters!

Next chapter please

A female never packs too many clothes.

cool

he sounds hot and perfect - where are his flaws?

to only be a writer and enjoy those moments...bliss

what was the first chapter? do you have it posted anywher?

That dog reminds me of little blondie here. The poor turtle is still tramatized by the way! Nice chapter anyhoo...aren't you working on the next one yet? That was your excuse today!