|Reviews for Relapse, Rewind, Repeat|
| Parapaxis 11/25/09 . chapter 1
| 403 Forbidden 7/13/09 . chapter 1
This is very intense, I like the "(rinse and) Repeat," part because it had a sort of ad nauseum feel to it. Very...raw, overall, i would say, especially the "carved into me" part.
| GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 12/30/08 . chapter 1
I like it:) Beautifully written.
| LostInMe 12/28/08 . chapter 1
The length of this poem appeals to me - not long at all, but not so short that it doesn't contain enough to judge - as well as the way all the individual lines are of similar (but not too similar) length.
| Chasing Skylines 12/27/08 . chapter 1
Wow, it's like the narrator has convinced him/herself that this is a process, and might as well just 'relapse' over and over again. I liked the way you conveyed that through the "3 R's."
seeings as it's carved into me.
Just seeing. No s.
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