I'm sorry, but this is corny. What you're describing isn't that terrible of an event, and it comes off more whiny and wangsty than anything.

Sadly, things of this nature happen to everybody who is new to a place or doesn't really blend in.

Did you know Eminem was put into a concussion at age 10 and when he woke up, had to re-learn all his basic functioning because of a bully who beat him cause he was white? Yeah. Same reason people always chose him to shoot at-the only white person in an all black neighborhood is an easy target.

This was really great. You handled it much better than I did though.

That was so beautifully written, I almost cried (but you know me). I can feel the emotions in your writing...I can feel them pass through my heart as if I was there watching it myself but I was helpless to help you. You deserve a hug! *hugs*

I loved it. I love it a lot! I got to learn a whole new memory of your childhood. And you wrote it so well. Like i said, it was as if I was there watching it.

I love the ending. So uplifting. Kids are so cruel. But that which does not kill us makes us stronger, though I'm not sure if that really fits...XD

I can't wait to read more of your stuff! You're an amazing writer!

InuOtaku34

Wow, that was an incredibly sad story to read, I can't imagine what it must be like to have to type it up.

I don't think I could have survived in your shoes, you're a really strong person, you know that right?