I love the first three lines of the first piece. I like the rest of the poems overall, but not as much as your usual work, which makes sense given the summary. The meter is really good, though, and it's interesting to see how the thoughts flow.

Nice little poetic drabbles. Throughout all of them, your rhyme was very good. It wasn't overdone or forced, and I like the fact that the whole thing didn't rhyme.

[The ruined girl sits by herself] I wasn't too fond of this line. It was a bit plain and undescriptive. Based on the rest of this, I think you can do better :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)