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welcome to meganland 2009-09-07 . chapter 3
I like this story :) The fact that you never update it is slightly annoying, though! haha, oh well.

I want to see more of that one boy, the really hot one. I'm wonderng what his deal iss.
captain wentworth 2009-08-28 . chapter 3
Yay! An update! I love it! I'm studying science at University so I like the way I can kind of relate. ^__^

Eagerly awaiting more!
WinMyHeart5444 2009-08-26 . chapter 3
I loved the chapter! Haha, I completely agree what you said about myspace/facebook/twitter. :D One of my friends has all three, it's ridiculous! I love Ben, favorite character so far! Update soon!
CATpuccino. 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
Ben is so nice ;) lol
SunsetRainbow 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
I loved this - you're a great writer
Cambridge sounds awesome XD
AzA.vee 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
Interesting. I'd like to see more. Update soon :)
jenjen-0 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
Ack I hope none of my professors are mean or evil or strict...the one's I've met were all nice and funny. But then, I only start in 3 weeks, so who knows. I'm all panicky now. I'm so used to nice teachers :(
Hazelnut Romance 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
update soon.
LaMeO1 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
hahaha
i really like this story
update soon
=D
CATpuccino. 2009-08-24 . chapter 2
I fell in love with the prologue.
LaraineGlass 2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Amazing start. I love it already.

Also, you managed to turn a cliche into something completely unique and fresh. Kudos to you for that. Can't wait to read the next chapters. I love this story already.

I love the last line. ...love has strings attached...
WinMyHeart5444 2009-08-16 . chapter 2
Haha I'm pretty sure that if someone was playing Flyleaf full blast in my hallway I would be pretty happy :D I love that band so much! Almost as much as I love your story btw. It is awesome, Ben is adorable as is Karishma. Haha, hot college boys.. I'd like some of those :) I really hope you update soon, this is so good that I wish that the stupid 'continue' arrow would be there! But *sigh* it is not so. :P Sorry for the rambling, this is an amazing story!

Suggestion: I'd go back and reread there were a couple of places where commas should have been. But I'm sorry, I still love your story so much!
WinMyHeart5444 2009-08-16 . chapter 1
I love the beginning! It is such a great idea having the diary entry sort of thing, it really drew me in, and I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
toffeecakesxox. 2009-08-01 . chapter 2
i heart Karishma's name - very original :D
but, but! BEN IS LOVE. ALREADY.
he so cute! (:
(p.s. i have no idea if all the u's showed up. fp is mean like that.)
XP
jenjen-0 2009-07-31 . chapter 2
Ah hot guys in uni...I'm so looking forward to that! Going to Oxford (Brookes :P) in September - there better be tons of hot guys there. I will be so depressed otherwise...

And yeah go Flyleaf! Was listening to a song from them a few mins ago actually. But on the new All Time Low cd now...I love ATL xD

And this story is starting off awesomely of course too!
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