I really liked this. I'm not big on poetry for some reason but I really enjoyed the length and the way this was written. Each line flowed together beautifully. I give you a lot of credit. Awesome job!

Thats a lot to take in with such a sort story but I think that you nailed it.I'm so adding this to my favorites..Great jod

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Hmm, this poem is very interesting. I like the words in it and how it's very true to a far extent.

Great poem.

C.S.

I found this very interesting and very true. I like this a lot. Nice job on the rhyming and words.

-LBR

Roadhouse

That was surprising, O.O but I loved the boldness of the character and the way the whole poem was organized. Keep writing, I love the emotions portrayed in this =]

Sometimes I wish I talked in monosyllables, because I have the opposite problem: The mark of a man who doesn't have anything good to say is that he tries to hide this fact behind a smoke screen of words.

You don't need to apologise; I'm the one who should be sorry. And I am, really I am. I've re-read this poem about twelve times; I'm so sorry for making you feel this way.

I think that's incredible; the title and that idea are really original. And it's really well written and just wow. :)

Hahaha, I'm not going to lie, the title drew me in. The repetition of how you chew your fingernails is good for emphasis, and i thought the rhythm was really good. :)