Interesting, very short and 'choppy'. You get the emotions across though and it sounds almost bittersweet, like maybe you wanted to promise and wanted it to mean something. Just a thought.

Keep it up.

"I promised you nothing.
I promised you everything."

That was my favorite line. ;D

wow. such a good idea, and I love how you started each bit with You/I/We lie :D

Good work :)