 SugarCraziiness 2009-07-03 . chapter 1I never thought of trust that way, huh. Cool. If only guys were really like that, that'd make my life SO much easier. And, uh, I may sound a bit stupid, but what's A Word A Day? I don't think I've heard of it...
Overall, awesome one-shot. Seriously, your one-shots are probably some of the greatest stuff since sliced bread! (ah, old joke, okay...I'm shutting up now...)
--Leanne :D
By the way...I've never been a beta reader, but I'm a pretty good grammar and spelling checker. And I can sorta see if things flow. IDK. It's just if you still need one. |
 madeleine friction 2009-01-13 . chapter 1oh my gawd I effing love your one shots, I'm going through them when I'm bored and they make the boredom go away :D |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-01-04 . chapter 1You have done a great job! All your characters are adorable, especially the ever-loyal Mercedes.
((Thanks to your story, I have just figured out why I have so many stormy relationships with boys. Well, this is because I hardly trust them.)) |
 KariandTK 2008-12-30 . chapter 1aw. That was so cute at the end where that became her favorite question. :) |
 Lian Bynum 2008-12-30 . chapter 1Finally! Do you know how long I've been waiting for this?
That was cute beyond all reason! I totally loved how you described him kissing her! *begins day-dreaming* ...
*ahem* Uh, so yeah, I loved this a whole lot! :P
Thank you so much for writing this, mi amiga! *hugs* |
 sweet vanilla mint 2008-12-30 . chapter 1This is so sweet! :) |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-29 . chapter 1Another winner, Kristy dear..j'adore, really. :)
It was so cute and sweet!! I'm sure Lian loved it. I just thought that the little "fight" scene between Anya (great name, btw) and Derek (god...the hottness associated with that name, so great my dear, so great) was a little rushed. I would have liked to see a bit more spark, a bit more KABOOM!..but obviously I still enjoyed it.
I particularly liked this phrase "his Godzilla-Cheshire-cat-smile". Very creative!!
Write more soon! :P |
 victoriai434 2008-12-29 . chapter 1hey again! loved it!!
i really enjoy reading your stories!
good job! ^^ |
 T 2008-12-29 . chapter 1 Very Cute. :)
You are a very good writer. |
 NattyAwesome 2008-12-29 . chapter 11. A-FREAKING-MEN! I can relate, like, amazingly to that.
2. I loved it! It was so good! Great job! |