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shakey 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Good job! Ocean is a cool name btw.
shy green rock 2009-01-16 . chapter 5
Alicia seems to know way too many people at that school...why exactly do they send kids into the woods by themselves?

Oh yea please check your grammer and spelling, I don't mean it to be mean, but due to the mistakes it was hard to sometimes understand what you were trying to say; thus, making it hard for the reader to understand.
Searching Crystal 2009-01-15 . chapter 5
Ocean is funny in the morning. hehe!
Lynn-Night 2009-01-15 . chapter 5
Good job!
Update soon!
Love it so far!
shy green rock 2009-01-06 . chapter 4
So sorry that I haven't been able to read and review your story...it seems like this Christmas you were really inspired because you wrote so many chapter for several stories!!

I like the plot for this one...what exactly does Ocean look like? You said he was short right? How short? Shorter then Camrie?
Lynn-Night 2009-01-03 . chapter 4
Good job!
Ocean and Camrie are so cute!
Update soon!!
lulu.lemon 2009-01-03 . chapter 4
your fast with the updates!
I enjoyed this chapter and im starting to see a little spark between Ocean and Camrie maybe? :)
Anyways keep up the good work and keep updating!
Maxegirl1313 2009-01-03 . chapter 4
Jeez, I really like this~!

The only thing, is that maybe Ocean and Cam's(Pet name XD) relationship is moving slightly fast? Or is their relationship sort of like a camp one, were you try and become best friends extremely fast, because of the limited time? Or rather is their their friendship a necessity in both of their eyes, sort of a way to ensure cooperation?
lulu.lemon 2009-01-02 . chapter 3
yay 3 chapter!! I really like this story so far and i hope that ocean and camrie end up together, however i can't really tell if they are all still in a big group of people or if they already broke off into small groups. Anyway, great story so far so keep up the good work and please update soon :)
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-01-02 . chapter 3
i put off reading this for a while honestly evben though it seemed intriguing enough with the plot. Now that I've read it I'm quite curious as to what this can lead to and i want to learn more about Camries past and why Ocean was so..quiet before. So...anyhow i like the story and how you came up with the plot idk but its a really amazing one. soo update soon!!

- kay gee
Searching Crystal 2009-01-02 . chapter 3
hahahaha! this is awesome!
Carlotta Lynn 2009-01-02 . chapter 3
Hahahaha, I like this story a lot. Everyone is so funny! I can't wait for more!
lulu.lemon 2008-12-30 . chapter 2
I really like the idea for this story! I'm excited to see what's going to happen, please add the next chapter as soon as possible :D
Searching Crystal 2008-12-30 . chapter 2
Ocean is a very interesting name. He doesn't strike me as the type who would burst out laughing, but it was cute. =)And I like the name Smokey Mountain. Hope you get those reviews soon so you can post more!
Maxegirl1313 2008-12-30 . chapter 2
I am extremely interested in this story, and please update soon.
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