|Reviews for Obvious|
| Isca 2/17/09 . chapter 1
I like the stream-of-consciousness feel to this poem. It was like an internal dialogue.
| Scarlet's Pen 1/6/09 . chapter 1
as the last part said, the poem showed a lot of denial going on there. you conveyed it well though and i liked it!
i didn't see any mistakes so there isn't anything not to like about it. good job.