I like this story very much.
Thomas, the big bear of a man, uh sorry, wolf...
and Drev, the sensitive quiet one.
It is quite romantic, in a 'rugged man' kind of way.
I like the way Drev seems unconscious yet conscious of his feelings for Thomas and loving his pet name for him.
'pup' just makes me melt in a puddle...
Thank you for sharing.

--watch out shameless begging ahead--

Is there any possibility *beg* for you to write an 'M'rated sequel to this *puppy eyes beg*, telling us if Drev got to be a werewolf and how these two rugged men, erm, mate *blush*
Please?
Pretty please?
Anyway, sorry for this very rude and extremely selfish request, you may ignore it at your own convenience...

Great story! keep it up! ^_^

Very nice, interesting and well paced story, thank you for posting it!

That's not really the end is it. There's a second chapter right *hopeful face*

I saved this story until the kids were back at school (I didn't want to be interrupted while I enjoyed) and it was worth the wait.

The exclamation point breaks are good foreshadowing. I know something going happen and I can guess what it (or some of it will be).

“Drev eventually moved from his booth after he paid the bill and moved to the bar.” Left his booth, maybe?

“Drev looked over his employer’s body with the clothes blocking his view.” Without?

Very tactile man, this Thomas.

“waking up with the roster” rooster?

This might not need fixing, but “his arms wrapped around Drev’s lithe frame” is from Drev’s POV. Would he see his own frame as lithe?

And “with a man they barely knew for less than two months” is kind of chunky. barely knew or knew less than… I’m not sure you need both.

Does anybody say, “It came to pass” when talking about their own story?

It ended a little too soon. I wanted them to get hot and heavy. But I liked it.

Aww, I loved this!! Though I think Thomas needs to watch what he says when he loses his temper...haha. But, as long as Drev forgives him, I guess I can too...:))
Anyway, amazing story!! Drev and Thomas are fascinating characters…and they're so perfect together! Marvelous job!