 Unwritten.prose 2009-10-03 . chapter 8Holy crap. This is has the right combination of sweetness and cheesiness. It's perfect. |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 8This was a really cute and perfect ending! Your story is great, it may not have a bunch of dialogue but the actions and thoughts speak louder than any dialogue would! |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 6Aww how cute, your characters are very interesting. I love your story! |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 4What kind of people are they letting drive buses now? Just joking, great chapter. The style of your story makes it 100x better! |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 3Post-it notes! Very amusing, this is a lovely chapter. The girl just can't get a break! |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 2Oh you're alternating between driver and rider, exciting! I hope they end up together. |
 Ruby Sue 2009-08-01 . chapter 1I really like your style of writing this story, can't wait to read the rest! |
 ksonic 2009-06-26 . chapter 8that was yet, another great story! :) |
 P.F Ally 2009-06-25 . chapter 8Aw...real cute. >w<
Too bad it ended there :) |
 P.F Ally 2009-06-25 . chapter 2LOL. This cracked me up! 8D |
 Frozen.by.Sloth 2009-06-25 . chapter 8This was too cute for words. I really liked the last two endings. - oh
His smile.
Wow.
Really effective. :)
I really liked the story. |
 Noie 2009-06-18 . chapter 8 Great job with this story. I totally enjoyed it and I'm love the way you were able to communicate a lot with some well thought out words. |
 Spurlunk 2009-05-27 . chapter 8I love your writing style, and the format of this is quite original and interesting. Awesome! |
 Semicharmed love 2009-03-15 . chapter 8this was just adorable.
definately a great read that just makes you feel all happy inside. :) really great job! |
 gigi-2000 2009-02-14 . chapter 8AWESOME! Way awesome. I loved how you portayed the driver. And that you never used their names. |