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TinuvielDork 2009-11-25 . chapter 4
This story is SO much fun. I'm totally enjoying it at each update. :) I should say more, but honestly, I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly appreciate your humor writing.
-Tin
lunabella 2009-11-25 . chapter 4
aw I hope we don't have to way TOO long for the next chapter which I think will be very very interesting :D
Great job! I love it so far.
LindsEy 2009-09-20 . chapter 3
Oh man thank you thank you thank you! There are so many stories where the lindsey/lindsay/lyndsey is a **, and i love love love having my name (even though you spelled it wrong:) on a character who isn't a total airhead! Now that that's settled--

Do u think u'll continue switching POVs or is it just a first few chapters deal? Ur rite, this concept isn't exactly completely original but i still love it. Not so sure about Eric, he seems pretty 2D for the main love interest (I think he is rite) but considering he was only in the story for like, one chapter so far I'll cut u some slack :-)

Please continue making a good name for all those Lindsey/Lindsay/Lyndseys out there!
deactivated account sorry 2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Sounds interesting. Hmm... I'm going to read the next chapter.
BeingMyself 2009-08-23 . chapter 3
I'm addicted already. You should be really proud, it's hard to find a good story on FP lately.

What I'm wondering is why Heaven isn't Panhellenic president?
xenolith 2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Haha that last liner was so great! I thought this was a fabulous start, like... you got right into it, I really loved that. It's effective, too. I'm definately interested and oh, your writing style is great as well!
EasilyDamaged 2009-08-18 . chapter 3
Oh! I was so pleasantly surprised to see you had updated this story. :) Like I said yesterday in my review, it's really nice to read a story about two girls switching bodies.

I didn't know you'd make it from Heaven's POV as well but that's a good thing, I believe. :D I hope to read more soon!
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse 2009-08-18 . chapter 2
This was really hilarious and interesting! And pretty original...!
EasilyDamaged 2009-08-17 . chapter 2
I hope you decide to continue this! It's off to a really good start. :D The idea of a girl switches bodies with another girl is quite original! I'm really curious to see more.
cookie monsta 2009-07-27 . chapter 2
Rather interesting plot you have here, can't wait for more chapters. The whole best-friends-turned-enemies is rather cliched though, don't you think? Will they be friends again in the end?
Mrs. Fang 2009-07-14 . chapter 2
lovin' it!
more more more:)
xi-love-you-x3 2009-06-03 . chapter 2
Kay. So I'm absolutely in love with this story so far. I find the main character likable and feel that when the view switches I'll find Heaven likable as well. I can't wait for the next chapter. It looks like a promising story, with definite character building.
Bill Kaulitz 2009-03-26 . chapter 2
oh my god! awesome story!
i want to see what happens to Lindsey and Heaven when they talk about what they are going to do with Eric!
KnotFamous 2009-01-20 . chapter 2
Hey, I enjoyed this - please update soon!

I like the play on Heaven's name.
ukrgrl 2009-01-09 . chapter 2
that was great!! i loved it so far...the plot is cool
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