| Reviews for Revenge is Sugary Sweet |
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cookiewolf 9/15/09 . chapter 2awesome ) |
C.C. Lynn 8/16/09 . chapter 4Haha, when Alexia came back to Sunnyside I was like, "Hell yeah, look at her now suckahs". The last two chapters were short, but it only makes me want to read more- so update soon :) |
Lolipop9466 8/9/09 . chapter 4Heyy! I love ur idea! plzz continue? *puppy dog face* |
RetardedChicken 7/29/09 . chapter 4PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update I finally get to tell you this unstead of you telling me. This is great so far and I so wanna see his face when he finds out who she is. He's gonna look like such an idiot. Update once again I say :) xx |
RetardedChicken 7/29/09 . chapter 3she showed him:) luved this chapter |
RetardedChicken 7/29/09 . chapter 2another good chapter, I can't wait for her to get revenge on Jake! |
RetardedChicken 7/29/09 . chapter 1great chapter, this Jake kid seems horrible. He kind of reminds me of the Jake in my story :)I will try and update my story but I suck at being bothered to write so yeah x |
KelaBelle 7/22/09 . chapter 4Ahh... loved it. |
CountingOnBetrayal 7/14/09 . chapter 4I really this could make into a wicked story. So far you've done an awesome job. Update soon! |
HighOnBrokenWings 7/13/09 . chapter 4Yeah *Sigh* It was short. And thats disappointing :( Im sad now. I was really enjoying reading this... But now. Now I have to wait for the update. Oh, and if you want some pranks to pull on Jake things such as a sanitary pad stuck on his back with tampons dangling is a good one. (Before you look at me like that soumnds impossible, trust me, its not. Stick the tampon strings to the sticky bit on the pad then whatck it on the bastards back!) *Preferably make it a big pad* Another prank could be the good old bucket on a door way thing. She could follow him home and then call thinks in his window, or throw rocks at it for days or nights, keeping him up, or freaking him out. She could leave threatning letters in his post. Prank call him after he watches that scary movie... (Is it called the ring) And tell him that he's going to die in seven days, and then follow up with an array of pranks that creep him out and make him think that he is going to die. You could make it so that she starts being nice to him and makes him fall in love with her (Cliche, I know, but youve got to love that one) How about replacing his toothpaste with something really gross. Or making him look like an absolute fool in front of his friends, with a one on one game with one of Alexis' sports that she plays, and make him lose. She could record him doing something really embarasing (Like getting out his childhood teddy when she does all the scary pranks above and hugging it at night for comfort) and then post it all over youtube and stuff. Yeah... I could keep on for days. I hope this gave you some ideas so that you can do some more writing for us! |
HighOnBrokenWings 7/13/09 . chapter 3Hehe. I liked this chapter, except Alexis seems a little bit of a rude bitch, actually. Like to the office woman, and stuff. I mean, she definately has right to be like that to Jake, because he's an as. I bet that half my review was made up of stars. Damn... |
HighOnBrokenWings 7/13/09 . chapter 2Okay. It was really good :) Except... Did you realise when you reverted into third person you stayed there? Right in third person? I thought it might have just not hit you :) |
HighOnBrokenWings 7/13/09 . chapter 1AH! I love these kinds of stories! And the beginning of this one sems especially good! Unique and awesomely awsome. Who hates thirteen year olds when it comes to being so insecure themselves that they have nothing better to do than tease others? Me! I do! Must move onto the next chapter :D |
LaMeO1 7/11/09 . chapter 4i want those updates! lol good story so far D |
whispirit 7/10/09 . chapter 4I love the whole storyline of this, but I really think the chapters should be a bit longer. :) I like Alex, she's cute and has an attitude. My kinda girl. xx Kylie |