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ErikaVtV 2008-12-30 . chapter 1
I like it its really cute, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it like I did... my only critique is maybe of your add more lines between every repeating phrase, it got kinda repetitive in the middle but if there was more between the the whole 'Either way' part I think it would be great!
Really good :)
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