wow... very itense... i love the passion th amin character feels..."What I wanted was to make him hurt. To make him bleed, cry for me, and need me. He would become mine in a way he had never belonged to my other lover. I always received what I wanted." That line in the very beginning already makes me want to hurt him too LOL nice job Arianna

Wow. Sick son of a **. Ah well. I really do like him, he's a great character. -shrug-
Ahwell.. hoping that isn't going to be the ending of Breathtaken. I'd be terribly disapointed if it was...
Lee

...Wow. Bad Ally! How could you sleep with bastard Kendrick when Armand is dead. *Dies of shock* And he seems so much more open and wanton with Kendrick, too. Maybe Armand should be rough with him more often; he seems to enjoy it. Still, even though Kendrick is a creepy-as-hell-bastard, I like the oneshot. Didn't enjoy Armand being dead, though. *Pouts* I lurve Armand. Enough to misspell love. xDD Glad this is just a AU oneshot. :)

Oh, that was...different. Kendrick is sort of a bastard, lol. I like your writing style, and this story...I look forward to more!

Ash

OMG i love this chapter you have to post another onshot or anything with these two charactors in it. I have officially fallen in love with your charactors please post another set with this paring

I read this the other day, but didn't get the chance to review you until now.

And my, my- it's absolutely hot! If this is your first attempt at writing lemony stuff you have nothing to be ashamed of! (seriously, you should read my first attempt. It was sad. I blame it on my lack of skill in English when I was 15 since I'm a foreigner...)

I'm not sure what I liked best though...hm. Maybe that it was from Kendrick's pov? His mind works in a fascinating way, really.

The thought of Armand dead and six feet under was sad though...Please don't make that happen O_o

That said, I can't wait to read the other one shots you promised your faithful bunch ^^ Never mind the wait, it'll be worth it!

-Kanilla

I'm honored that you felt like you had to write mine first!Awesome job! That just shocked me. XD

Okay, now for questions! Usually I prefer ** because it is more natural like you said. The other two sound strange. To be honest, those words disgust me as well for the male parts. It just sounds gross if overused, but it is okay to use them every once in a while. For the female, I use more cencered forms like Womanhood or opening. Just something that could substitute for those words since they also gross me out.

I think you made the One-shot match the song quite well. It was amazing! You know, you should make your stories into a book since it seems they can be long enough. With the one shots, you can make them into a book of extras or something. They would definitely be something to by!

Honestly, you did rather well, very detailed. Kendrick's mind was more clean than I thought. Surprising and entertaining! ^_^

Don't worry for the writing when dead, that is when I have the best ideas. XD Sad to say but that is true! Sad, isn't it? Now, honestly, I have not watched darkwing duck much, but I can actually see that. XD So you are not too crazy if others think the same thing! Or you are just as crazy as them...? Oh well, who cares?

Hope you had a fun Christmas as well! I did, everyone played a pranck on me and mom! It was sad! (Don't ak.)

Hope to ready more of your storie here soon! Good luck with the other fanfictions! I think I found a newpairing that I love other than the main one! XD

It was good yet *sniffle* I don't even want to think about Armard being dead. Kendrick is very interesting in his head. I like him in a weird, twisted way. Alister reacted way differently then I expected, but it was cool. As for the whole **, buttock, butt. It depends on your writing style and what your writing. Personally, I think butt or ** is better. Buttock sounds weird and too stiff for most situations. Male genital.*snicker* sorry, I'm immature about it,but it's weird to write about it.Anyway, there's words like just erection,length,wood, and I'm sure there's more, but I can't remember them. Personally, I have no problem with dick or **( sorry if I offended you there), but I have no problems with different words as long as I know what you're talking. :)Hope that helped!