wah! so delish ^^

AH!! I just read your whole story and fell in love! It was so hot and then sweet and just...it was wonderful!

This was cute. Definitely a good read. Thanks for putting it up ^_^

Great story so far.

Not sure if anyone's pointed this out yet, but:

'Geb turned, narrowing his eyes at Geb.'

Shouldn't the Second Geb be 'Robin'?

*Laughs* I have to admit I didn’t see that ending coming. Despite the fact that I usually find multi-somes a little distasteful, I found this particular one both believable and rather sweet. ^_^ It almost felt like it couldn’t have happened any other way. The line when Robin said that Marshall would also find his love was a little exciting. Does this mean we can look forward to a Marshall-focused piece? I really like him. ^_^

I have to say I really enjoyed this story—a lot. The characters were diverse and engaging. You have a very lovely writing style that lets the reader experience a lot (color, smells, sensations) along with these sweeties. I don’t know if this is one or your newer pieces, but I had a look at some of your others and the writing is technically (grammar, etc.) is much improved in this work. Well done!

One more thing, I really like when about a third through the story when Geb backed off when he realized that Robin was into it/him AT ALL. I appreciate the fact that he could be a big enough man to step back and let the boy have some space despite his own desires. Well done.

Okay, I’ve rambled enough. Kudos to you!

I'm happy with how it ended. :) it was cute and hot and we know how things are going to end. I want a Marshall story! I love those three. they all have their quirks, but we love them anyway. ;) great job!

hi! OMG! I really liked the ending! so sexy but sweet at the same time!! :D
thanx for letting me know when you updated! You know whee to find me! :D
I really think you r a great author
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HOLY CRAP I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!
*dies*
So freaking hot OMG! (I don't know, I have a thing for threeways XD)
I'm sad to see this is the last chapter, but I like the way things turned out: I'm glad you decided to include Marshall, I think he was an important character, especially considering his role in Geb's life ^__^

Lovely story!!

that was an amazing chapter.
thanks for finishing anotehr wonderful story, looking forward to mroe of your creations =p

For a minute their i thought simon was going to come into the room. This was such a beautiful ending for evryone involved.


Are you going to do and epilogue and introduce simon?

That would be an even better version of this fantastic story. ^_~

hi!! OMG! even though I have to wake in 3 hours Im here reading this! I read all 12 chapters and I love this!! really !
its too bad I dont have an account here to follow when you update
I knew of this story @ livejournal
same username eiira.
would you mind leaving me a message when you update plz? I really like to read the ending!
well even if you cant I love this!! congratulations on writing something so great!

Poor Ged. He's about to get laid with the only guy he's ever loved and poor Marshall is attacked and possibly has killed someone. wow. the drama. lol. great job!

I hope that geb and robin stay together because marshall is being a real pain in the backside everytime something comes up is geb the only person he knows?

And pretty soon robin is going to get tired of it as well.

They were in the middle of having sex and here goes the phone and whose on the phone but marshall sometimes i think that man has a device in geb's apartment spying on him .

Okay he knocked his ex out with a frying pan call the cops end of story. He the ex was tresspassing so he had every right to knock him out.

looking forward to the next chapter.^_~

Baww Robin! *glomps him*
I'm glad he decided he could trust Geb enough to share his past with him...
The fact that he didn't fall in Geb's arms and confessed his love is also pretty plausible ^_^

Great job!

and there's the Robin issue. great job and I'm glad Geb is growing up!