"The handmade river of promise." I love this metaphor for 'hard work pays off in the end.'

"We learn how to top ourselves from smiling too much, because we know how far down we'll fall." My heart hurts after reading that; so sad!

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This is completey astounding!
I loved every sentence.
Great job, Very well donee.
Definitely have room in my favoirtes for it.