I really liked the imagery for this poem.

It's full of feeling.

My favorite phrase is:

I see the moon

She's laughing at me

and I long to be her

Because she is free.

Nice work.

Most of the time stars are overused in poetry, but I really like how you worked it into yours as if they almost are the memories you have of the one who broke your heart.

Good :]

This is good! I like how you used the rhyming... and the imagery is lovely!

Well done! :):D:):D

Lovely. And good imagery :) Sweet and simple. Happy new year ;D