Amazing. Kudos, and keep it up.

Wow, this was so interesting! First off, it was such a cool idea to make a poem out of music terms. The way you assign their meanings to different things in our own lives make it all the more potent, especially the way you describe their relationship in the 3rd stanza. Another thing was the double meaning of cupid's bow, which could either refer to the top of someone's lips or, the way I think you use it in your poem, as the bow of cupid. That is ingenious! I also really like the way you bolded words to make that phrase, which kind of gave me chills. The only thing was that the rhyme at the end of the last stanza kind of threw me off. I might change the word "stick" to "baton." Anywho, this was such a clever poem!

Good luck with the book, btw. Ever find a publisher?

-Frost