The Lady of the Lake caught me off guard because, like Gwen, I'd pictured her being more sedate and regal. That being said, I thought your portrayal was a refreshing change from the other ones I've seen.

Screaming lady...definitely a lead in to the next chapter. Will Myrddin get his dinner on time?

Good chapter.

I must admit I am a bit confused about who is speaking in this chapter.

Intreguing. A very different take on the Lady of the Lake, it will be interesting to see where this goes.

I'm not quite sure where you'll go with this, but I like the reversal of the Lady's stereotypical character. I guess I'll have to read on and see what happens.