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The Light and The Glass 2009-01-04 . chapter 3
a wonderful elixir, is it not? :)
a very nice piece.
Lavi R 2009-01-02 . chapter 3
I loved the mum's frustration one! and The relaxations one as well...Ah tea...Wish I could relax too and you incoorporated the mothers feelings very well inm the second poem. I fully got her frustrations. as for the third poem i understood that as well because it's like how I generally feel after a stressful day...I like the way you made the reader understand...(I don't understand the first one due to my own stupidity0 Please explain it...
Anywhoz loved it my dear!
:D
LOVE LAVI AKA PUDDING!
:P
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