Mir gefällt der Widerspruch "There’s things I didn’t understand and still I don’t…"

Auch "bye isn't just a "bye, is's the buy" ist stark

This was beautiful! I like the part:

"This 'bye' isn't just a 'bye'

it's the 'bye'...My first love."

I really loved it! Its really great! Write on!

This is very good! I especially love how you finished, but you did the whole thing very well!