I think I'm just reading this story to see Paris. He was my favorite character in The Eiffel Tower. :P

Just kidding. I like Gabe too, and this whole Indra-Luke thing is getting pretty interesting... Not to mention there's actually a guy I kind of like who is Indian- but he's got a girlfriend, so, eh, whatever- so it's really refreshing to see a love interest that's not just regular old Wonderbread. Even if I'll never get the guy, I certainly hope Gabe will!!

Keep writing- I'll look forward to your next update (and Paris's appearance)!

yay for updates! I totally know what you're talking about with the first person bias, I think it's great that you've thought about all that. It makes for a high quality story. I also like that Gabe isn't perfect, because really who is? It makes him more real.

Great chapter

The dialogues helped with the character development, so it's not filler-like.

Poor Indra, Gabe doesn't seem as into the whole thing as Indra, and seem to be using him to get to Luke; hope Gave falls really hard for Indra soon!

Aw, I want to know more about what happened between Seba and Paris (I'm a big believer in the 'high school relationships shouldn't last' philosophy though). Gabe is kind of a playa'. Good for him :)

Wow...This is...really good. I like it. A LOT.

I read this and wholeheartedly wait for more updates. Indra sounds sexy and once you mentioned the slight British accent, I was reminded of a much younger teacher I had. Don't worry though, he was pretty hot for being 50-something. M, British-Indians...really not much sexier than that.

I would like to say, though, that one of your characters reminds me very, very acutely of someone I know and would rather not have met. As such, said character looks exactly like the person I know. As a result, I would very much like to see Luke get hit with a baseball bat from a giant muscle-head guy named Chalupe. To the groin. Repeatedly.

...Please?

~WoS

Yay! Quick chapter is quick.

Let's see. I'm a big Indra fan at the moment, mostly because the idea of someone wanting to pursue a relationship casually without a great deal of angst is totally hot; also I am picturing him as Sendil Ramamurthy which never hurts. The way Gabe is... I don't know, manipulating or using him doesn't sit quite right at the moment, but I'm sure the skeletons in his closet will come out shortly and sling another wrench into the works.

Also, Seb! What a funny little bear. His self-destructive dating habits shall soon be his downfall, and I'm starting to think Julian is just a fancy name for his right hand. Jokes, but unveil your mystery man soon!

Thanks again for a lovely read

I liked the chapter. We are getting to know Indra more and more... He seems like a really nice guy... I wonder what he sees in Gabe to make him so persistant in going out with him. I don't thinks are going to be nice when Indra discovers that a part of Gabe want to "date" him just to get back at Luke. And I fear Luke, he is creepy XD And Seb... I keep liking him and it was good to see him in this chapter. Hope you update soon! :) Thanks for sharing this with us!

Wa. Loved the past two chapters. I like Indra, for all that the previous two chapters he seemed a bit stuck up, he now seems like quite the sweetheart. And Gabe with Indra is awesome. Quite positively enjoying it. Also enjoying the rapidness of the chapter updates. Way to keep me interested!

Can't wait to see what's going to come from Luke. He doesn't seem like a boy who gives up. Bitch that he is.

Oh! And Rylin? Love him. Seriously. Reminds me of one of my exs. Haha.


On the Seb/Paris note, ok, so you said you were going to sort of interject parts of their story into this one but that it's mostly focused on Gabe, which is understandable, but please don't keep them separated! Julian seems like a good guy but as unrealistic as it is, Paris and Seb seem like a good fictional forever couple. I want to believe in them. I'd be so sad if you kept them apart. I don't want my little fantasy to be crushed.

Ok. that's it. Loving it. Can't wait for the next one(or two depending on when I have the time to read) hehe.

ahh i love gabe (:
but what happened to seb and paris? i liked them together!

really like'n your chapters so far. so glad you finally let us meet Indra..even though it's only been 3 chapters (but it felt like forever!) he's all around smexy o.O can't wait for more!

yay you updated. Still loving the long chapters. Indra sounds cool, but that part at the end seemed kinda out of character, but since I don't really know the character that well I guess I can't really say that. I'll just trust your great master plan. Especially if it includes Indra and Gabe going at it.

Love it so far.

Great characters and Luke is really getting on my nerves, but Indra...sexiness in the flesh (well words).

Can't wait to read more!

Great chapter!! I really wanted to meet Indra and I liked him. He is obviously nicer than Luke but at the same time there's more mystery around him that I can't wait to discover. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Hey,
It's super exciting to see two updates for Electric Feel sitting in my inbox in the morning, I can tell you that. I think your writing has definitely improved [in the direction of becoming more subtle in its implications] since you wrote Eiffel Tower, and I'm probably going to be in the huge minority in saying that I think it's neat and realistic that Seb's kind of, you know, moved on from Paris. I'm excited to meet Julian too.

Let's see... Indra was a huge surprise this chapter, which is awesome. I thought you were gonna take him and put him on a crazy pedestal, but now it just all seems a little foggy. Maybe Gabe reminds Indra of someone from his past? At any rate, I love it.

Hooer, long review is long. Thanks anyways for the brilliant writing