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Reviews For: Bartholomew the Chicken
TuMama 2009-01-19 . chapter 1
Dear Author,

Just to let you know that I do read your stories and that I am very proud of you. I liked the story you started about the kitty at the PetsMart, what is the ending for that one?

Tu Mama
dpbclover 2009-01-07 . chapter 1
The story was good... It's sort of odd how you can put such a long story line in about 200-300 words. Keep writing!
Ichigo the pug master 2009-01-01 . chapter 1
I could not submit a signed review because I am on my mothers iPod and I don't want to sign in on here.I am Darkened Angel Feathers,to let you know. I found this story very odd but it was good nonetheless. I liked how it really
Wasn't a spot after all and the general randomness of the story and where did the inspiration for this come from? It was actually very well written and if you put your talents towards a story that is actually about something, people would flock to read them
Ernest Bloom 2009-01-01 . chapter 1
your style of composition is quite improved here from your previous stories. we'll look forward to continuing improvements in 2009.

the thought of immersing a muddy chicken in a bath tub and scrubbing its feathers is rather frightening. anyway, living in nyc, it's safer for Bart to have a horn so he can beep at wayward street traffic.
Dareth22 2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Hahaha... that was good! Great job!
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