Nice qoute at the start of the description!A bit deppressing but its an epic poem.

Wow, this gave me goosebumps.

Oh my goodness, that actually made me cry. And it gave me goosebumps. Oh, wow. That was really good. :)

Cry cry he's so dead. Good, very good. Cool if you coulda rhymed it, but rules all the same so I am to blame :D

Chilling. The rhyme adds to the poem and really sends the message through. The last lines of the poem almost made me cry. The image of a father waiting for the son that will never come, with a birthday cake is very poignant

Aww! That's so sad...

Great job...

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good job.