The ending was...sort of okay? In any case, the rest of the story made up for it; Without a Noumenon was ridiculously awesome. Hello actual character development. :D

;) Interesting, is all I can say... lol. I really like your writing style and how smart everything sounds. I'm not embarrassed to say that I had to look up some words. I also love the details with everything. ;) Props.

WOW. Haha. :D Never a dull moment with kids like that.

;) Again, another good chapter... I shall keep reading.

Wow. :D Senior Class President... Interesting.

:D Haha. I think Winter's into him.

LOL. I laughed so hard at the end. And I didn't completely understand it.

Wow. I like this. :)

I loved this story. You have such a unique writing style, it really stands out. I adored the characters as well :)

Oh i definatly like the look of this. Your characters have grabbed me from the start, and i'm a sucker for likeable, intresting characters. I adored the line about ambigous bits liking! So i'm going to forget the my last term of college starts tomorrow and going to see how far i can get with this baby tonight. :D

I read this whole story in one sitting. Literally, with no breaks except the one to make tea somewhere between chapters 15 and 16.

Completely worth it, let me tell you. I haven't read anything lately that moved me quite like this did. It was beautifully scripted; I couldn't stop reading it. The fact that at times you can convey such a profound meaning with a relatively simple structure is something wonderful.

There are so many things I could say about this, but in truth, I was speechless for a lucid moment after the end.

-C.S.

the ending made me laugh because I happen to be reading Oedipus the King. nice writing. wish you wrote longer stories... I wouldn't mind forty long chapters of your writing.

omg so I love your style of writing, it reminds me a bit of Toni Morrison in that the reader doesn't always understand what is going on, and everything is very complex. I just had to review to tell you: I literally lol'd at Lindsay's "totally awesome chicken salad" and "mad skills"...that's SoCal alright. hahahaha.

My brain hurts too, the was kinda yeah. Also a bit put off with the whole substance abuse thing or use at all but that's just my whole no-potentially-harmful-substances-in-my-body thing kicking in. Except for sugar and caffeine but everyone carefully ignores that those are drugs...now I'm tangenting randmoly...

I'm not sure if it hits funny but it's definitely snarky which is just as good. _

Why is it gay guys always have the pretty female harem?

He was kidding about the racoon thing right?